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Pretending to be looking for an address, motorbike thief in Tangerang was arrested 2 hours after being battered

 

Virna Mustika

Wednesday, Nov 8, 2023

 

Arrest of perpetrators of motorbike theft at Tangerang (Picture: Virna’s Photo)

 

Tangerang, A man was arrested by residents after stealing a motorbike at Indomaret, South Tangerang. The perpetrator stole the motorbike by pretending to look for an address. Over time, his suspicious movements made residents alert around the crime place. This made the residents furious and immediately beat the perpetrator until he died.

 

At that time victims of theft left his motorbike in front of Indomaret. she parked his vehicle with the keys still attached to the motorbike. At the same time, the perpetrator came to the area and pretended to be looking for an address. After the perpetrator tried to take the motorbike, the residents quickly grabbed the perpetrator and immediately beat the perpetrator until he was bruised.

 

A thief who was caught by a locals in action at Indomaret, Tangsel, Wednesday, 8 November 2023 died.

 

 

"Residents succeeded in uncovering a criminal case of motor vehicle theft by arresting a perpetrator with the initials B," said the Indomaret parking attendant in his statement, Wednesday (08/11/2023). The anger of the residents of South Tangerang (Tangsel) over the recent rise in cases of motor vehicle theft (curanmor) seems to have been vented. "It's true that the perpetrator of the attempted theft died because of being judged by the residents," said the parking attendant.

 

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  1. Goldie’s Logs10 Desember 2023 pukul 21.40

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  2. Goldie’s Logs10 Desember 2023 pukul 21.41

    In my opinion, The news of a motorbike thief pretending to seek an address in Tangerang and subsequently being arrested after two hours, even if battered, underscores the vigilance of the community and law enforcement. It's a reminder of the importance of staying cautious and reporting suspicious activities to ensure public safety.

    BalasHapus

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