An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback

 Name: Virna Mustika

Nim: 1988203067

MEET 10: An example of a feature story in news writing andits analysis and feedback

 

 

A. LEARNING LOG

 

Number of the meeting task

Topic of the meeting

Source

Vocabulary Usage (New vocabulary words or phrase encountered during the session material)

Example taken from the text

Grammar

Meet 10

An example of a feature story in news writing and its analysis and feedback

Lecturer’s note

Courtesy: kesopanan (noun) 

E.g."he had been treated with a degree of courtesy not far short of deference"

 

Do not use courtesy titles such as Mr., Mrs., Miss or Ms. unlesstheyare part of a direct quotation or are needed to differentiate between people who have the same last name.

Imperative sentence

 

 

 

Cue: isyarat(object)

E.g."Mark cued well early on"

 

If the street name or directional cue is used without a numbered address, it should be capitalized and spelled out.

Present tense

 

 

 

Abbreviation: singkatan (object)

E.g."SKU is abbreviation for stock keeping unit"

 

 

How human-interest elements add depth and relatability to news 

Noun phrase

 

 

 

Colleagues=rekankerja-noun-a person with whom one works in a profession or business.- Consider feedback from colleagues or editors and make necessary changes.

Some widely known abbreviations are required in certain situations, while others are acceptablebutnot required in some contexts.

Complex sentence.

 

 

 

Resist: melawan(verb)

E.g."antibodies help us to resist infection"

 

Journalists should resist using dramatic or emotional language.

 

 

Declarative phrase

 

 

B. REFLECTION

II've learned from the discussion of writing andevaluating news stories that a news story is a comprehensive narrative of an occurrence. The framework utilized in news features writing, whichfollows the standard news writing structure using aninverted pyramid writing style for news reporting, has proven to be the most beneficial to me. I now understandthat crucial information appears at the top of the newsand irrelevant information appears at the bottom of thenarrative after reading the information about newsfeatures. This lesson teaches us that organizinginformation from crucial to irrelevant without affectingthe news and making it easy for editors to summarize thenews is necessary for a news report.  the text's body andconclusion.

 

C. SUMMARY

According to the lecture’s explanation and lecture note in their article titled “An example of a feature story in newswriting and its analysis and feedback,” it was stated thatThe Jakarta Post lists six must-try noodle joints in Bandung, West Java, including Kedai Wanmin's deep, rich-brothed bowl of 'niu rou mian' (beef noodle), Rumah Makan Linggarja's beef soup with wheat flour noodles, and Kedai Wanmin Jl. Semar's beef soup with wheatflour noodles and spicy and sour soup with sweet potatonoodles. The news writing style analysis criteria rubricrates the feature story about the six must-try noodleshops in Bandung as good. Although it includes sixmust-try noodle restaurants, the title may be moreinteresting.  

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